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"Doin' the Louvre"

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  • Trevor BurrowsN This user is from outside of this forum
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    "Doin' the Louvre"

    Paris, December 1991
    For Patricia Zamora

    You're a junkie just like I am.

    After we dump your husband in the Louvre's cafe
    to sip the steaming tea and chew on his poetry,
    we're off like schoolgirls, screeching in duet,
    dazzled by the bright eternal gasp of ancient things.

    We've got no business here, homegirl and compañera,
    we've got no business working our mouths around
    this sharp, exquisite language, or savoring the sweet
    tongue-squeeze of pastries, glossy cakes and shaved chocolate.

    We're of simpler stock--city and country dust,
    collard greens, hopscotch, moonpies, bullet holes
    and basement slow dances. We are shamelessly American,
    rough street girls with rusty knees, the flip side of cocky
    Parisian wisps in slim cashmere coats the color of tobacco.

    Girlfriend, you and I are *too* much scream for this place,
    but you're a junkie just like I am.

    -- Excerpt from "Doin' the Louvre" by Patricia Smith

    #TodaysPoem #Poetry #PatriciaSmith

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    • Trevor BurrowsN Trevor Burrows

      "Doin' the Louvre"

      Paris, December 1991
      For Patricia Zamora

      You're a junkie just like I am.

      After we dump your husband in the Louvre's cafe
      to sip the steaming tea and chew on his poetry,
      we're off like schoolgirls, screeching in duet,
      dazzled by the bright eternal gasp of ancient things.

      We've got no business here, homegirl and compañera,
      we've got no business working our mouths around
      this sharp, exquisite language, or savoring the sweet
      tongue-squeeze of pastries, glossy cakes and shaved chocolate.

      We're of simpler stock--city and country dust,
      collard greens, hopscotch, moonpies, bullet holes
      and basement slow dances. We are shamelessly American,
      rough street girls with rusty knees, the flip side of cocky
      Parisian wisps in slim cashmere coats the color of tobacco.

      Girlfriend, you and I are *too* much scream for this place,
      but you're a junkie just like I am.

      -- Excerpt from "Doin' the Louvre" by Patricia Smith

      #TodaysPoem #Poetry #PatriciaSmith

      Trevor BurrowsN This user is from outside of this forum
      Trevor BurrowsN This user is from outside of this forum
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      I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH. I wish I could find the full poem to share here but I don't see it online, and it's pretty long.

      SO SO GOOD.

      It is funny and effusive and feels like the joy of both discovery and rebellion at the same time.

      I love that, like a lot of Smith's poems (from what I've read from her so far), you can really HEAR the poem as you read it, and that supports just how visual/sensual the poem is at the same time. You can see taste feel so much of this poem.

      Ugh, I want to share this with everyone I know. Can I do that instead of work today?

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      • Trevor BurrowsN Trevor Burrows

        I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH. I wish I could find the full poem to share here but I don't see it online, and it's pretty long.

        SO SO GOOD.

        It is funny and effusive and feels like the joy of both discovery and rebellion at the same time.

        I love that, like a lot of Smith's poems (from what I've read from her so far), you can really HEAR the poem as you read it, and that supports just how visual/sensual the poem is at the same time. You can see taste feel so much of this poem.

        Ugh, I want to share this with everyone I know. Can I do that instead of work today?

        Pauliina LievonenP This user is from outside of this forum
        Pauliina LievonenP This user is from outside of this forum
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        @NearerAndFarther Oh yes, you really can hear and feel and taste this! Thank you for sharing a part of of the poem!

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